"I like this. It's not complex in terms of shooting and editing...hey, it's a talk show! But the gentle mocking of the good pastor works well with the device of the....well, I won't spoil it for any new viewers. Also I laughed out loud…"
" The story does not unfold with Ms. Pickens' usual clarity, and there's a few too many linked tracking shots for me, but still....the mood is set strong, and I love the time-lapse shadows climbing the walls. Great…"
"Brava. I know Scottius quite well, and this is one of my favorite builds of his. You've done a fabulous job crafting a story from this environment where, as you point out, there was none. Particularly crafty is the way you avoid letting the…"
"Surreal, haunting, and just the right length. (Douglas likes the short form!) My only small critique would be that when the spoken voice begins the music could come down a bit in the mix. Right now the piano is fighting the VO a bit, making the…"
Thank you Douglas for your comment i do agree. I wrote an explanation it's conception so there will be another to come. It was an example for the family. And thank you for your Welcome.
Ive sort stayed behind the lines for a time doing my own thing. sometimes I try not to view others work while I'm creating so I don't loose either my vision or whatever I'm trying to do with a film. I think you get that.
I am very into Machinima and creating stories that evoke emotion and love to make up stories. Most times it does take you away from interacting with others doing the same work which can be a downfall.
It is good to be inspired by others and to see what they r doing. It's very important to not isolate yourself to much i have found. So I'm spreading my wings most would say and reaching out beyond my own comfort zone.