Cruise Control - Director's Cut

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Comment by Douglas Story on September 21, 2011 at 9:15pm

I enjoyed it thouroughly. Kudos to all concerned.   Oh, and I laughed at the line "....and some salty snacks for later."

Comment by Sonicity Fitzroy on September 21, 2011 at 8:14pm

haha, I can relate to this video from a journalist point of view. Good development of characters. The ambience is a bit noisy for a news room - vary levels of sound in the office; let's hear some other office sounds. The sounds are bit canned after awhile during the first part or let it fade out - perhaps the door can close and the sound can soften to a murmur. That might help. The transition to the water sounds work, and the nice long shot helps establish new act. Good movement. Characters are expressive. Voice-over is well done. Once sound is established, lower it a bit. I like how you only gave us a hint of people on the deck. Nice scene changes. Overall well done, great quality, animations are strong. music works nicely. I think this is a case in point where the voice-over/sound and a solid script strengthens the visuals. Great job. Thanks for the add! Love it. Great wrap-up, nice close.  (Hey, especially good given that you were under extreme deadline)